A song I wrote...

[stephaniem]

I just wrote a song for the first time with my boyfriend who recorded it and played on it for me.

Just thought I'd post it here to see what everyone thought!

http://www.myspace.com/thehistoryofapplepie

[HerrPersilja]

it was great! very catchy. had to listen to it twice.
he plays the instruments and you sing? what's the lyrics?
now i'm gonna listen to it a third time

[stephaniem]

Glad you liked it He is a guitarist but can play keys and other stuff also. We recorded the whole thing in our bedroom so he played all the instruments since I don't have a band as of yet!

The lyrics are:

"Out of View"

Beyond grazed knees and knuckles and your
Newly ripped shirt pocket
Can you feel this now?
Can you feel this now?

We ran for miles and then some
Forgetting all the chaos
We had come from
Can you believe it now?
Can you believe it now?

All the joys of being here with you
Couldn't be any clearer
Now that we are
Out of view
No more spectulation
Judgemental accusations
We are better
Out of view

Out of view (x4)

Lets go on an adventure
There's no-one stopping us dear
We are in this now
We are in this now

All the joys of being here with you
Couldn't be any clearer
Now that we are
Out of view
No more spectulation
Judgemental accusations
We are better
Out of view

Out of view (x2)

[LiquidKarma]

Very cool song!! I listened to it twice. Thanks for sharing that with us!