The Office Quote - need advice

[rbaron]

Hey friends

So, I want to stitch this quote: http://imgur.com/ehDuj

But it's pretty long. So I tried to do typography. I'm pretty sure I'm failing pretty hard at it lol.

I'll take any and all suggestions to better-fy it. Also the colors are not set.

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[rbaron]

I edited it a bit, but my husband says it's still clunky on top...

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[Eliste]

Does it really end with "every of the time"? I don't know (not having watched it) but the English usage bothers me.

But I think it's much better now layout wise. I don't see the clunk ones he's talking about.

[rbaron]

Does it really end with "every of the time"? I don't know (not having watched it) but the English usage bothers me.

Yeah lol it really does end with that. It fits the character.

[fangy89]

Love thissss! The Office was such a brilliant show. I don't see any clunks either but the only thing that does throw me a bit is the diagonal of the "every of the time" and the negative space it creates on the bottom left corner.