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Peaches "* the Pain Away" pattern (opinion wanted)

Postby Zombified » Sun Jan 03, 2010 3:52 am

I want critique on this before I stitch it. It's just not fully sitting right with me for some reason.



I changed the sprite of the orange from Pacman to make the peach haha.


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Re: Peaches "* the Pain Away" pattern (opinion wanted)

Postby librebel » Sun Jan 03, 2010 11:10 am

Well, you asked for critique, so I'd take away all the orange lines within the peach and just use orange to outline it and then backstitch a curve to designate it as a peach. For some reason, it's looking really busy to me as it is, but I'm nit-picky like that. :D

Where's the quote from?

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Re: Peaches "* the Pain Away" pattern (opinion wanted)

Postby Zombified » Sun Jan 03, 2010 11:52 am

I tried so hard to make it look like a peach so I was trying the checkerboard pattern as pixelated shading hahaha.
It's from a Peaches song:
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Re: Peaches "* the Pain Away" pattern (opinion wanted)

Postby Zombified » Sun Jan 03, 2010 11:53 am

I tried so hard to make it look like a peach so I was trying the checkerboard pattern as pixelated shading hahaha.
It's from a Peaches song:
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Re: Peaches "* the Pain Away" pattern (opinion wanted)

Postby librebel » Mon Jan 04, 2010 2:32 pm

Thanks for posting the song! That was pretty neat. At first this rankled my not-so-inner feminist but the beat is pretty nice. Good luck with it.

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Re: Peaches "* the Pain Away" pattern (opinion wanted)

Postby Zombified » Fri Jan 15, 2010 5:28 pm

Hahaha!
And thanks!


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